Night Mistress

i have never seen the BBC versions.

it's pretty good. though, i do agree with sokool15 that you are moving really fast. try to slow down. i hope you put up another piece soon.

Love part two. can't wait for part three.

Yay! you finished your story line. i love it. i hope you create another masterpiece like it.

After the battle, Peter and the army rested before the trip to Cair Paravel. Susan tended to the people’s wounds. Aslan talked to both Peter and Edmund. “I’m proud of ...

It's creepy but i like it.

it's a little short. introduce your characters and strech it out.

Wow! her parents should be more concern with her grade in school. i hope you put up another piece soon.

I just saw the movie and i must say that i was empress with it. Now all i have to do is read the book.

The movie was awesome. I had to go buy it when it came out on Dvd.

I see a few mispells in your exerts.

I'm sorry. i accidentally post this chapter twice. sorry! :oops:

it was a tree nymph.

Cool! thanks.

A tree woke up Peter and Edmund. “Be still, young princes. I bring grave news from your sisters. Aslan is dead. He was killed by the White Witch,” the tree ...